Poem Learning Story.

By Anonymous -
Poem Learning Story.
Purpose: To invoke a feeling and make the reader visualise that they are there.
We have been learning how to write our own poems by using figurative language and also using all the senses. We were also learning to use personification to describe the clouds personality.
We have been watching videos and listening to others to get some of their prior knowledge.
In my poem I used Onomatopoeia such as Bang!. Here is one of my poems. Here is an example to my poem.
My cloud poem.
Battle of war beginning
Soldiers defeating each other with guns
Lightning coming out there guns as they fire
“bang!” “boom!” goes the guns
Fighting to death as they go.

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