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My Poem.

Brain-Storm- Hummingbirds, Leaves falling off trees, The bright shining light in my eyes, Shivering winter, Soccer game, Skiing, Sun rising up, The sun unfreezing the ice-cold snowfield, The beautiful hummingbirds sing as the sun rise when the bright shining sun came in my eye. Playing soccer while the shivering winter strikes me. The leaves falling from the trees as the wind storms. While the sun unfreezes the ice-cold snowfield.

Writing Test.

Standing,  digging my feet deep into the hot sand. Sun burning and heating my body. The sun shining and burning upon my back. Hearing the loud kids screaming as they play and run around other families. Hearing the seagulls moan like little brats. Waves crashing near me and other children. People surfing in the cold/shivering water while tasting the salty water. Water splashing upon the strong rocks. Smelling the delicious food that the adults have presented for their families. Hearing the food sizzling as the family is waiting. Feeling the pain of the rocks hurting my feet while I go out into the ocean. Tasting the salty water as I relax floating on my back and swimming. Following the footprints of mysterious people. Trees waving their branches as if they were arms. Feeling relaxed as my tummy is full with delicious food presented by my family. By Titi. Success Criteria: Use lots of interesting expressions in my voice Clear loud speaking

Earthquake poem

Earthquake Poem. Sleeping in darkness Dreaming Feeling a big earthquake Seeing draws opening and shaking Terrified that I might die Earthquake stopping immediately Then draws shaking again but stronger Waking up extremely Getting out of my bed Running down stairs under the table terrified that I might die Crying with tears as i’m sitting down under the table Wondering what will happen next? To be continued.  

Legacy Statement.

Legacy Statement. Veititi will be remembered for having a beautiful voice and harmonising. Veititi will also be remembered being a kind person to everyone and being a kaitiaki. She will be remembered for having lots of talents for example: Violin, Music, Singing, Piano, Guitar, Ukulele, Keyboard and drums. Veititi will be remembered for being a positive learner in class. She will also be remembered for being respectful for e.g listening to others, sharing brainy ideas and asking gold questions. Veititi will be remembered for being a good friend because she helps her friends whenever they're in trouble. Veititi will be remembered for receiving awards for example: Violin and principal awards.

Product learning story.

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Product Learning Story. Our success criteria for promoting a product: When we can…. Create a logo for our product eg Create a slogan to promote our product because people remember it eg.The Warehouse, The Warehouse, where everyone gets a bargain. Tell others what we think they should do by using persuasive words like You should…. Telling others what is good about our product using emotive words eg fresh, better Only telling the good things eg Saying that it i s safe and fun Offering a free trial or something else free Only use a few words for impact Show an image of our product that is big Show the image from different angles Show happy people using our product Choose colours that contrast Choose colours that represent the product Use examples Comparing - saying your product is better than others “finally” we get to do a product about making teenagers more healthy and improve their well being. For our product we sticked wit